All Comments on 'Angel's Story Ch. 01'

Wow Mary what a great story. I can't wait to read about what happens next to little Angela. Thanks for a great read. Jeff

So, all women are teases and sluts, and men know better, and no means yes. A first chapter that guarantees this reader will go no further. Whatever writing talent you have is consumed by the totality of your lack of originality.

Your story is the same as 1/3 of the non consensual stories. Bravo