All Comments on 'Animal Lover Ch. 07'

Poor Emmett was just getting her settled with the idea and the alphas have to screw things up was a great chapter and i can not wait till the next one

very well written chapter. I feel horrible for lyssa and emmett, what a tragedy. also, i wish the chapter were just a bit longer. Other than that, good job!

Not having total control over your own life must really unfathomable. Being a "Beta" rather than the "Alpha" has more than complicated not only Emmett's life but Lyssa's as well. This has been such a wonderfully original story to read, and it appears it's only getting better with each chapter. I'm excited to see where you take me next!

Loved the chapter, Lyssa's decision to join him was forced and I can understand why she is upset with Emmett. I cant wait to see where you take this story now.

Wow, what a roller coaster of emotions. You really did a great job of making the emotions of the characters palpable. It was easy to put myself in the places of these characters and feel the conflict they must feel. I wonder how she'll ever be able to be sure if she feels something for Emmett knowing that in reality she has no other choice but to die. The betrayal he must feel from his Alpha is awful too. I don't like them very much :) They ruined the tenuous relationship they had formed and now were imposing their will on both of them without a care for their emotions. I look forward to seeing how you move forward. I hope you don't resolve it too easily as you've set it up so that it isn't the perfect fairy tale and I'd like you to stay true to the emotions you've raised in the characters. Looking forward to the rest!

how well their intentions may have been, the alpha's really put their foot in this relationship. L was opening up so nicely to E and is now closed off again. she has to make a hard choice, join the pack or die. i hope the alpha's redeem themselves somewhat.

I am bitterly disappointed that you left it there, I was enjoying this chapter and was extremely pissed of at the Alpha's for what happened and then when they finally get to the den you stop. I feel so sorry for Em he is my favourite character in this story!

Bad Alphas!!! You have made me feel so sorry for poor Emmett and his lady . Hope to read more from you soon.

you need to write this in the past tense, not the present. It is very difficult to read it as is. If you are telling the story, then it is as if you have already seen it, thus past tense. I really like the story line, but please be aware that professionally, it is incorrectly written and whoever is doing your proof reading is missing typos like he instead of she and might instead of night.

I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter and I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011

It is NOT very difficult to read it as is! You are the only one who seems to have a problem reading it.

The only thing I would say is that the bit where the Alpha's are speaking to each other as they drive away could have been separated with a

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that and the fact that I need more NOW! LOL

Please continue with this!

Don't listen to the other anon. Plenty of excellent stories are written in the present tense and readers learn what is happening as it happens. As yours is shaping up to be amazing, keep true to your style as changing now would cause even more confusion!

I think this is a very good read, it has a interesting plot line and for once the female isn't swooning all over the place over her werewolf boyfriend (mate)

Please continue.

This story is wonderful! As good as any I've read in book form! Please keep going!

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't keep me any longer! I can't stand the wait! I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to know what happens Em has been so patient and when he finally get his girl to accept what he is and everything starts to come together, the big A's show up and stuff things up! Grrrrrr!!

I like the darkness of your work. I'm not even a little bit sure things will work out, and I appreciate the depth.

The fun and easy choices in writing are worthy and enjoyable, and often found on this most lighthearted of erotica sites. Your authorial voice and vision are original and refreshing, though, and I admire your writing greatly.

Can't wait for more, but as a disabled writer with my own mate and modest litter (twins) to keep up with, I understand well that life must sometimes precede art.

I don't blame her for feeling trapped. Poor Lyssa (and poor Emmet)

I agree with the other reader- I really like your originality in making Emmett a beta, not Alpha. All the other stories I've read on this site have Alphas as lead characters. This is so much more interesting!

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Fantastic job on the characters! They really carry the story so well. Its refreshing and engaging to have male lead who isn't always in control (or the alpha) but is still considerate and respectful. Lyssa is a very likable lead too; I fell for her character so much more because you didn't define her by "perfect" or "flawless" looks but her strong and practical character. I wanted to compliment you on that before continuing on with reading. :)

Fantastic story, completely enthralled!

Tess (uk)