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Click here[We have things to discuss.]
[I'm in no mood...]
[Now.]
With a snarl Emmett turns and lopes back to the house.
- COMMENTS
Pteroisover 7 years agoFantastic job on the characters! They really carry the story so well. Its refreshing and engaging to have male lead who isn't always in control (or the alpha) but is still considerate and respectful. Lyssa is a very likable lead too; I fell for her character so much more because you didn't define her by "perfect" or "flawless" looks but her strong and practical character. I wanted to compliment you on that before continuing on with reading. :)
Anonymousover 9 years agoI agree with the other reader- I really like your originality in making Emmett a beta, not Alpha. All the other stories I've read on this site have Alphas as lead characters. This is so much more interesting!
rosamundiover 13 years agoI like the darkness of your work. I'm not even a little bit sure things will work out, and I appreciate the depth.
The fun and easy choices in writing are worthy and enjoyable, and often found on this most lighthearted of erotica sites. Your authorial voice and vision are original and refreshing, though, and I admire your writing greatly.
Can't wait for more, but as a disabled writer with my own mate and modest litter (twins) to keep up with, I understand well that life must sometimes precede art.
willieoneover 13 years agoPleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't keep me any longer! I can't stand the wait! I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to know what happens Em has been so patient and when he finally get his girl to accept what he is and everything starts to come together, the big A's show up and stuff things up! Grrrrrr!!
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis story is wonderful! As good as any I've read in book form! Please keep going!
wotmeover 13 years agoI think this is a very good read, it has a interesting plot line and for once the female isn't swooning all over the place over her werewolf boyfriend (mate)
Please continue.
Anonymousover 13 years agoDon't listen to the other anon. Plenty of excellent stories are written in the present tense and readers learn what is happening as it happens. As yours is shaping up to be amazing, keep true to your style as changing now would cause even more confusion!
