All Comments on 'Animal Lover Ch. 03'

by KemMyst

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UncertainTUncertainTabout 2 years ago

Developing nicely!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Enjoying the development between Lyssa and Emmett

Glad Ronnie is gone - or is he? Ronnie seems to be enough of a jerk to try to get back into Lyssa's good graces - never mind that he abused her and was drunk. If Ronnie wants a lady, he's gotta be considerate of her wants and needs, not just his. I'm guessing Emmett will be smacking Ronnie down before Ronnie learns his lesson.

luv2read2

Agree with the previous poster, if anyone thinks the story is boring, then don't read it - or wait until it's completed and skim through the story (the rest of us will enjoy the details).

LilMissNerd1LilMissNerd1about 8 years ago
Negative anonymous

No one is forcing you to read this series, or anything for that matter.

Now, keep in mind, this is a new story. He has to make the blue print before he starts building the actual "house." If you're looking for spank material, look elsewhere. Kem is just introducing us to these characters and giving us back story on what brought them together. Next time, be a little more constructive in your criticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Could this be anymore boring?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good Work

Good doesn't mean that it's mediocre, it means that I have been reading a lot of literotica stories so far and have only took to a few authors. If your story continues as it is, you will definitely be a new favourite author.

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Groooooan!

Why is it everytime I get addicted to a story the author decides to make me wait even longer between chapters. It does NOT endear you to your readers to leave such long gaps between chapters. Please post A.S.A.P!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I lve ur stories so much I have it like 4 time please write some more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MORE!!!!

MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

freddyfrijolerofreddyfrijoleroover 13 years ago
great story

I cant wait for the next chapter, good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!

I am salivating at the mouth waiting for the next installment!

lovebird24lovebird24over 13 years ago

great story so far! can't wait to read more!

Sunamoon37Sunamoon37over 13 years ago
awesome!

Love this story! keep going your doing great! Hope it wont be to long before there is more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More. Please. Soon!

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

canndcanndover 13 years ago

Loving it. Why didn't he change form when she was being hurt or jump through the door? I love the story and can't wait till he changes form. Look forward to getting more on the pack too. Keep writing!

mariasmdmariasmdover 13 years ago
aww

once again good job. so excited to finally meet the other side of emmett! thanks for the update. P.s does lyssa work and have friends???

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Thank you for update!

I am really loving this story and am looking forward to the next chapter please don't take to long in posting it!!! I am loving Em to bits! She really needs to forget about the @#$$#%^ Ronnie I will be so disappointed if she forgives the obnoxious pig! It would truely be a turn of for me and I am enjoying this story so please no forgive him.

honeybreehoneybreeover 13 years ago
A great update

This story is picking up nicely. Can't wait to see where you take it next, I like that with each passing chapter you are building the story making it more than one dimensional. It is a different type of werewolf story and I like it, keep up the good work and glad that Emmett pissed on Ronnie's jacket...lol

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Thoroughly Enjoyable

I love the way Emmett is slowly playing up to Lyssa. With the exception of getting into bed with her, he has taken slow steps. Now with Ronnie being an asshole, Emmett was holding nothing back. He was ready to attack. I'm really enjoying this story. Emmett is a ware of importance who isn't acting all alpha with his possible future mate???????

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

The story is picking up nicely and you have added more texture to the story with the introduction of the wolf's pack mates. Looking forward to reading the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
AW SHUCKS

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