by mimaster
Over more than 3 years you took us on a journey - some I really enjoyed, some I skimmed through, but the fact i read #96, says it all. Thanks
What an absolutely fabulous story.
I feel that I have just lost a friend now that I have finished your epic tale. You need to be complemented on such a rich writing style that has created empathy, compassion and a wealth of views on different sexual genres.
At times I felt quite emotional over some aspects of the story and often welled up, so congratulaions again on such a beautiful well crafted tale.
Giving your sory 5* really is just not enough
I look forward to reading more of the tales of Ann & Neil
This story series absolutely captured and held me engrossed late into the night, many nights until the morning sun started filtering in the east windows. Your characters developed as the story progressed and became easy to relate to as acquaintences or friends out of my own past. What a shame it is that your characters show so much more compassion, romanticism,and underlying love than their counterparts in the real world. Would that the actual world was filled with characters as passion filled, understanding and nonjudgemental as your portrayals. You seem to have a very mature style of writing, with evocative situations and plot twists that elicit very emotional responses in the reader You weave unifying threads of eroticism and sexual tension throughout. Highly enjoyable read!ng! Wish I had remembered to give you 5 star ratings on each chapter. HOPE MORE EPISODES ARE FORTHCOOM
Thank you for one of the very best stories I have ever read.
I eagerly look forward to you fulfilling your promise to write more.
Thank you, again.
I am really enjoying the story so far, currently up to Ch. 29. Thanks for your efforts
Just can'tbelive the story is over... d companion of so many nights and your style of writing esured that the reader is engrossed.waiting for the sequel...plz fast..
I am so glad that I read this story after it was complete. Your writing is the BEST I have ever read on this site. You took ample time to develop the characters and weave new characters into the story as it unwound. You are truly a gifted writer! I look forward to your next adventure, the sequel to Ann. Thank you for taking the time and effort!, it was truly a gift!
It best story I have had the pleasure to read on this site and there are a lot of great stories here.
Thanks and keep writing.
I just finished this story, after working my way through
it over a month or so. I truly enjoyed the story and the
journey through it. I'm truly impressed with the time,
effort and imagination you were able to put into this
story. I was also impressed with the length of the
story without feeling it was padded anywhere.
I was feeling a bit let down as I neared the end, then I
saw your note that you have a sequel to Ann in the
works. I hope it will be as fully developed and LONG
as Ann, so I can spend a lot of time with it as well.
Can you give us any hints as to when you will start
publishing the sequel?
Again, thanks for a really great read.
Bob T.
MIMASTER -
I wanted to write my comments to "Ann, a Love Story". I am a latecomer to the story, and the entire thread was complete by the time I got to it, thank goodness, otherwise, would expect that I would be bald by now having pulled out my hair waiting for each succeeding chapter.
I'm not sure exactly how I ran across your story. I believe I saw a chapter link on the Random BDSM Stories section. It had a "Hot" rating and a high chapter number, so I took a look at your submission list. Wow, a story with 97 (98) chapters. Well I usually don't read Erotic Couplings stories, but all of them are ranked "Hot", let me a chapter or two and see what happens. Well I got hooked. I could not stop. At the end of each chapter, I absolutely had to find out what happens next.
You've made me care about all of the characters. Not only did I want to know what happens to Neil and Ann, I also want to know what happens to their parents, Darren and Betsy along with Marlin and Jean. I want to know what happens to Tina, Carol, Heather, hell it's even to the point that I care about what happens to Dale and Valerie.
And it's not that I just read through the story once. I keep going back and rereading the story. Oh let me just reread Chapter 32, and several hours later I've gone through another dozen chapters again and enjoyed every minute of it.
I'm just amazed at the volume of the whole thing. I've actually copied the text of everything into a single Word document so I can read it when I shouldn't or can't get to Literotica. The whole story is over 2000 pages of text.
Let me just say 'Thank You' for many enjoyable hours with all of your characters and all of their situations.
I cannot wait to see what happens in Neil's and Ann's futures in "The Married Years". I want to know what happens during their Honeymoon, their first years together, as they become parents, and as they continue their lives together.
Only just found your story. Like a good book couldn't put it down. Gone to bed so late just reading one more chapter. What a lovely story and even cried during the wedding chapters
Thank you.
Just finished reading the whole thing and it is by far one of the best stories I have read so far. Looking forward to reading the married years.
Thank you for taking the time to write this.
I loved the whole series and will soon be moving on to the sequel "Ann the Married years".