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by cstone2007

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not bad, but you need an editor

Among other things: it's PIQUED not peaked "my interest", and it's "Victoria's Secret", not "Victoria secrets".

More dialogue during the sex would have added a lot.

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