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Sputnik57Sputnik57over 9 years agoAuthor
Hello again my friend...

....thanks yet again for your invaluable and comprehensive evaluation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Good story, but ease up on the adjectives. Also try mixing in some new ones so you can't read the same one three times on one screen.

Sputnik57Sputnik57over 9 years agoAuthor
'Adjectives'; Yeah, my use of English leaves a lot to be desired...

...I do tend to rush some of my work, downloading it before reading through to pick up on those obvious errors; I don't use an editor. You'll have to forgive my impatience on that front!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Another story I'd love to see continued! Love your stories. Thanks for sharing.

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