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SLC, I think you have to ask yourself what conceivable benefit your paragraph of half-baked radical politics on the Alamo added to your story? If you don't answer "nothing," keep asking until you get it right. This would appear to be a road story about a relationship thus far. You have made some good progress at setting up conflicts in the relationship, but political asides can only detract from your story and divert your reader's attention.

Hopefully you've come back to enjoy San Antonio a few more times.