All Comments on 'Art Model Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Quite engaging...

A few typos and mistakes, but nothing a proofreader couldn't fix. Nice gentle story I suspect will heat up soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
GREAT STORY

Loved it.Very well written, great story line. Thought I was reading a published novel.

abc101abc101over 12 years ago
great story

please write more

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