All Comments on 'As It Seems Ch. 04'

more please!!!!

OMG love this chapter. Maybe now that they're here there will plenty of questions between the two of them and maybe the truth will finally come out about his crazy sister.

OK Loving the story. Just found it and read the first 4 chapters. Noticed the duration between chapters and hope this is not one of those stories that you can never read what happens. Loved to see another chapter soon and the progression of the story so I don't have to abandon the read. Usually, I'll wait until I see a final chapter prior to beginning a read from a writer I've never read before but you intrigued me. Hope I'm not disappointed.

Thanks

I am so glad to see an update to this ctory. Chapter 3 had me totally hooked and jonesing for chapter 4. It did not disappoint. I love that Conner can't quit thinking about her. I also like the introduction of new characters. Did I miss the explanation for the names Zia and Nathan? Please update soon!!!

Wow small crazy world...and Jennifer is such a lying user