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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good start

very intense and erotic and good descriptions

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
very nice

very nice, looking forward to additional chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
why

you obviously have no writing talents at all any way any how ... stick with your day job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Start

Outstanding!! I know Ashley is going to want more and more black cock. Probably in need of a gangfuck. She'd look great being titfucked!! Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
awesome

keep up the good work, you got a knack for inter writing

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