All Comments on 'Ashley's Submissive Journey Ch. 01'

Your story about this journey has me dying for more. As I read it, I couldn't help but wonder if this actually exists to some degree. Do these two people exist and this offer of yielding to someone? My body and mind are hoping for more. Please don't quit writing now. You have only just begun to touch my life with an excitement I haven't felt in a long time.

I enjoyed your story and looking forward to more submissions by you.

Loved it, can't wait for the next installments

I absolutely loved every letter of your story and am begging for more!

Let me begin by saying that this was an amazingly written story. While there are a few small grammatical errors, the feelings inherent in the writing bring us all into the scene, so to speak. I loved every minute, and I can't wait for the rest!

That was a pretty good story, but Ashley seemed a bit nervous.

and so looking forward to the next installment...

What can I say? Another brilliant story but I do have to say this story is much better than Courtney's story and well-written too. I look forward to the next instalment!

Caz x