All Comments on 'At First Sight Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
OMFG

Omg please keep going with this story it's amazing! Can't wait to read the rest! Keep it coming (no pun intended) ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome story

I like Emma and Goliath.He's more caring and concerned about her feelings.Ethan is just in lust and doesn't put her needs first.Looking forward to the next chapter. Team Goliath,stick to the evil that you know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please more!

I love these stories! It's torture to wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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yeah goliath!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 11 years ago
I like Goliath.

I hope Ethan stops manipulating her dreams. Definitely Team Goliath, here!

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 11 years ago
Team Both

I love both Ethan and Goliath. I really hope you can bring both to love her equally, and bring in some hit steamy sex scenes between the three of them. I am now a huge fan of the series cause of the plot, characters, and the potential of an menage relationship. Hopefully your readers will be persuaded to like Ethan like I do, because I love Ethan and Goliath.

Hope to read the next chapter soon.

hotmama20092011hotmama20092011over 11 years ago
MORE!!!!

Please please please don't take too long with the next chapter!

jaafrica73jaafrica73over 11 years ago
I love Goliath..!

You can't judge a book by its cover. Goliath is the MAN for Emma!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please write more of this soon! I can't get enough!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Goliath definitely deserves her more! He's so nice and doesn't seem to be rude to Ethan even though he is openly insulting the demon and trying to curve Emma's attractions with that. I hope Emma chooses Goliath!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
tbc???

are u gonna finish this story?

sexymomma57sexymomma57about 11 years ago

too bad the story was never finished. would have made one of the best stories i have read on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
aww

I love this so far!!! Please update!!!!

theInsaneArtisttheInsaneArtistalmost 9 years ago

Dang, wish this was finished...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please, continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rain...

on a picnic. Just when it's getting really good, it stops. Kinda like having someone bring you to the brink and then walk out of the house.

Great story. Please come back to finish it!!!

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