All Comments on 'Away'

ALL that build-up for WHAT - NOTHING! Absolutely NOTHING!

It must SUCK not knowing how to write, but pretending to be a writer. It must suck even more to not know what happens during real sex. It's painfully obvious that you stopped because you have no true knowledge of what happens next.

Sad...so sad.

I would keep it going with an added attention to each others' ass.

Hey if you have honey.... Go all the way between and lets see how deep a tongue could go!

it crashed..:(

Other then a few minor context errors it's a good read. You did well in ending the story where you did...it leaves it wide open for a second part to the story, in the mean time I'll just dream about how it ends. I'll be looking for the continuation of the story. Hopefully it'll be hotter and make me even wetter.