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All Comments on 'Bad Moon Rising'

by goldendragan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
liked it

I really liked the story and the sex was hot. you jumped a little too fast to the next day or the mornig and it was a little hard to follow. liked it though!!!

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

I stumbled on this and am glad I did. It was fast paced, and funny but sexy at parts too. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I really wish you wouldn't end it here.

I feel as though the characters could have had a lot more to say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
twilighting up werewolves

they like to cuddle and eat fruit?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Had potential....however...

This story seemed to move very quickly. It really didn't build at all. It had a beginning and it ended so fast. There were so many things you could have elaborated on, or explained. I was a little lost to be honest. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Even Twilight was a better story than this

lame

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