by shawalphamale
This is absolutely the worst story I've ever read on this site!!!
either it is a carbon copy or just luck but this story was already on this site a long while ago... sucked back then too... to bad you didn't make it better when you re-did it...
i hate to agree as I usually dont bother with negative commentary. However, this was so bad I had to. I have read hundreds of stories on Literotica, and few have had absolutely nothing in them worthwhile. This one makes that grade. It is poorly written, the plot is inane, the characters shallow and unattractive.
the best thing i can say is that you at least tried. Please though, stop.
I've enjoyed many DES stories and was delighted to see a new one on the list. However, this one doesn't cut it, though I can't put my finger on specifics as to why.