All Comments on 'Becoming Dominant Ch. 02'

keep it up, please another chapter sooner :)

...for the next chapter. Very erotic and well written, but you need to find another adjective than "abject."

The next one is submitted and awaiting approval. It'll probably be posted around the 8th or so. It's short, but I wanted to keep on this a bit. Not sure when the fourth will happen, but I feel like I know more of how these characters work now. Thanks!

Hoping that the posting won't be so long.

I understand how hard it is to write, but please give a small something.