All Comments on 'Becoming Dominant Ch. 03'

Please, keep writing!

This is a fun story so far!! Keep it up Please!!!!

What a wonderful read. Can't wait to see where you'll go with it. Hope you'll find time to write more.

Has limitless possibilities

Can't wait to see where this goes!

Casey and Monica as dominant lovers in all things with sex is my idea of the cream of life. That they will have any lover they want at any time and coerse regular people to really enjoy making you happy, which makes them deleriously happy is (while I cum) the life I need and want! This is one of the top stories of forever!! Thankyou while I cum again! Dirtysillyfhoughts is a very special writer!!

please continue the story. I am loving it.

So I'm about 6700 words in on the next chapter. No guarantees when it'll be done, but I am working on it when I have time. Thank you for all the feedback and votes! They certainly encourage me to keep at it. :)

I wouldn't mind waiting longer if each reading was longer. Instead of two pages each, you should combine two entries into one. Otherwise, great story! Definitely keep it up.

-G

I swear this gets better and better each chapter.

I agree that it needs to be longer, but I also know it's hard to turn out that much material so quickly.

Just know I'm loving the story, and am waiting for more.

Really, really, really nice. I agree with everyone else about wishing each chapter were longer, but I'll take what I can get. Excellent reinterpretation of the usual definition of the dominant. Much more enjoyable than the typical humiliation and abuse scenario. I hope you write at least another 100 or so chapters.

The story was doing great until you decided to destroy the fantasy by making your main character a feminist. Male feminists are universally creepy and disgusting and not even female feminists want anything to do with them. No genuinely dominant male would EVER lay claim to the title of feminist.