All Comments on 'Becoming Her Bitch'

This was very good, particularly for a first offering. You must keep writing! What an introduction - very well done, welcome and please bring us lots more.

Thank you - five stars!

You most certainly should continue writing. This didn't 'get me off,' but only because of personal preferences. You tell your story well. You put us firmly in his head space and through his eyes, we can clearly understand her. The dialogue is appropriately sparse and believable. Well done.

Hey, this is right up my alley. No pun intended. Carry on for sure :)

You have a real talent! You should continue on this story!!

Thanks so much for the feedback, I never imagined it would be so popular! I've definitely got some ideas for a sequel, so I'll put something else up soon.

I love that story !!!! More please more !!!!!

DD you wish haha

Please write more of this

this story is amazing! you have such a great mind for this. i am totally imagining it and almost shoved a household item in my ass to see how the guy in the story felt

Page 1 was great, page 2 left me wanting more. Let the woman take the lead.

Your FIRST erotica?! Holy crap, you are a pro, the teasing, the intensity, the submission, please more! We crave your beautiful, descriptive words

love it! wish I could be a slave to her!

Great. Loved it. I could feel her inside me. In m pussy. I think of my asshole as my pussy. I felt every inch of that big dildo go into me. My tits hurt from the clamps. Both put them on my tits and taking them off. Yes I would love to be her whore/slave. Ready to go on to Chapter 2. Great reading!

Definitely my favorite story

That was a very good start.i can,t wait to read the rest.please write more.thanks.

You have written a good beginning, hope you have more, turn thematically living couple and a lifestyle couple... again nice work

This was very hot. Way to go.

I fucking loved this. I've always been fantasizing with being this submissive, and I shared it with my gf. She wants to try domination, and she's asked me to find a good story to inspire her, and fuck... I think tonight will be fucking great 😈

To be totally used and abused

Great start to a series..I like the way this story started with the submissive guy being told to piss his pants at the coffee shop..

Woww i loved this story a lot i want a mistress like emily whoa i need to be treated like a whore like this and i readed this story as my first femdom story in this site this inspired me onto femdom and exploring kinks i readed the 3 but i only love this first part the most idk why the other parts are not like this first but this one is a great work but i have a confusion on this story i love bondage a lot but in this story at last sam was tied in a bondage while gets pegged i dont understand that bondage position and sam wears thong before on the scene but how emily fucked him by him wearing panties?? This is my only doubt haha anyone clear this doubt otherwise this is a best story i readed