All Comments on 'Becoming the Perfect Sister'

by dalespeer

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tvlove007tvlove007over 12 years ago
MORE!

More please. I wish I was him/her.

t_i_n_at_i_n_aover 12 years ago
Great Start

with the one exception that you advertised this as a more "normal" process, and the speed of removing the adam's apple is way too fast. No one would suggest that so early in the process (and then it would be a trach. shave) since voice lessons can easily change a voice without removing the adam's apple! :)

pg240pg240over 12 years ago
Good effort

Nice concept, but your use of the language is rough, and the construction is choppy.

jenellesljenelleslover 11 years ago
A Bit Quick

I don't know of any transexuals who get their hormones while drab on their first visit with a therapist.I takes a Dr to prescribe, the therapist only does some preliminary screening that can take several months. This whole thing was just to quick to be realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

need more chapters

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