All Comments on 'Bee and David Ch. 04'

I hate but love stories like this! On the one hand David is very dashing and mysterious and all those things that women fantasize about...

But on the other hand, there's Laney... the kind of man who is your rock, who loves you unconditionally and never judges. It's clear she has very strong feelings for him too... At this point I believe in his love for Bee more than I believe in David's. I can't wait to see what you do with this story!!

THE FRIEND NEVER GETS THE GIRL. it ruins the friendship and doesnt work.

So back off Lane!

I'm not keen on the body weight thing I've read this in a lot of stories and it really puts me off. Still love the story would just prefer less about the body dismorphia

But where is the sex..do I need a lot of it. But this is literotica. I want the love and sex.