All Comments on 'Beginning To an End Ch. 02'

by Koco_Kyss

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OH SUGAR. HONEY. ICED. TEA!

WHOA!!! I wish to meet a man that would make me orgasm AND pass out from just a touch!...lol...great job.

grunabonagrunabonaover 14 years ago
*****

It's different, but intriguing.

trinisamplertrinisampleralmost 14 years ago
i don't get it

i really don't understand why more people haven't commented on this story, it started of really great and i do hope that you find it in you to continue this story because i have a feeling that it could be wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
o.O

I agree with the previous poster this story looks badass though...can't wait to see how this all plays out :p

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 14 years ago
Taps foot!!!!

Please for the love of Mike update this story, I keep checking and waiting

Koco_KyssKoco_Kyssalmost 14 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments...i will definitely continue the story

missingit610missingit610almost 14 years ago
Waiting

Interesting story, waiting patiently...

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 13 years ago

NICE NAIL BITER, DON'T LEAVE US HANGING TO LONG...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Still waiting

Are you going to carry on with this story. I would love to see how ut continues.

KittyOh48KittyOh48almost 13 years ago
Strange but arresting!

This is a strange sort of story, but so far quite good, please continue it so we know how Alpha and Omega comes out!

StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsalmost 12 years ago
Hope

There's a chapter 3

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