by EmeliaBell
A great story. I gave it a 5! I only wish they had actually had sex.
Reverse_cowboy
How much fun to read when both characters are pursuing each other for erotic fun and games. I loved the secluded setting, the way they connected. A pleasant read - with more to come I'm sure.
Nice story here. I liked the repetition of certain details--coming (yep) full circle as it were, her sorta coming of age with a mature, dominate lover, and her first real experience with submission. The way you described his orgasm was fun. I know all about those silent man 'gasms. *sigh*
Looking forward to reading more.
This one reminded me of a woman I used to know--I think as general as the desciptions were if allowed me to be in the story.
Good stuff. Makes me miss the woman.