All Comments on 'Best Neighbor Ever! Ch. 02'

by Tomcatfive

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Just another...

wife with nothing to do and no respect for the man who provides her lifestyle for her. After all she deserves it because she is perfect and entitled and he is an asshole. Hmmm.. wonder who the real asshole would be in real life??? Hot sex is great. Swingers and true sharing is fun to read. Cheating and getting caught (by either) is good but this is just sex and fantasy... In real life if I caught the asshole(s) (yes the single neighbor is one too) there would be severe payback. The payback would be harsh and as underhanded as the cheating...Good writing just not my fav storyline (yet)??

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Hot

I thought this was another great chapter. Will there be a chapter 3. If not I'll try and watch for your name on new stuff. Keep writing, you do it well

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Going good

Liked the first better, but this was still great. Have to read the others, then your other stuff.

As for the other Anon, maybe she doesn't respect the asshole because he doesn't give her what she needs, and I don't mean sex. He doesn't seem to have much interest in her, but we don't know--he hasn't appeared much yet.

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