by chatbug
I often wonder where the women are that understand how much men desire their approval. Even to the extent of submitting to and serving them as a naked (and therefore vulnerable) play thing. Providing oral pleasure without hope of reciprocation and receiving manual simulation occasionally and solely for her amusement complete the submission. The faux-incestuous slant heightens danger but provides the door through which the relationship begins. Thank-you for this peak at femdom!
Chatbug you are to be commended on your fantastic method of introducing sensational femdom: so natural and believable. Just a shame that being such a natural domme, Erin didn't force some serious degrading ass worship as well. Hope you write some further escapades in the lives of Erin and Bert. 99/100
it is a good story. Howevr, the denial is more, reward is less. Try to balance it. Reward after denial is very sweet and is an expected attribute of a good, caring mistress.