All Comments on 'Beth's Husband Gets Smarts'
by STANISLAW_CH
- 17 Comments
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoAre you on drugs or something? This 'story' makes no sense at all. It isn't erotic and never will be. You claim at the start of your 'story' that you didn't like the way the husband was treated and you wanted to change things. What the hell are talking about? This 'story' is total utter bullshit. DO NOT EVER WRITE AGIAN. Go play with yourself somewhere else. Just not here.
Anonymousalmost 15 years ago"Beth entertains" is not your story and they are not your characters. BTW, you dont even mention the characters names in the story. If you didn't like the story, dont read it. You really suck as a writer. That was unreadable.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoSort of like finding a large pile of catshit on the front seat of your car and wondering who put it there and why.
digdaddyrichalmost 15 years agoIt may be that English isn't the authors first language. Hell, even though English is the only language I try to speak, I have trouble with it sometimes. Another problem might be that the author should read over his work, and let someone else read it before posting to the web. That will help in getting rid of the areas that wander into space. Thanks for the post.I gave 75% for effort, keep trying................Rich
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI don't know what your issue is; I don't care. I couldn't even follow this excrement. I don't know what the tempurture in crazy land is, but the heat has obviously melted your brain and you choose to inflict the punishment on us. Stop writing, get a life and one more thing....never procreate.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agostory are you taking anyway? you did not even mention the right title or author. well but anyway this could not have been better than the original story.
Anonymousalmost 15 years ago(Yawn) Yet another misogynist pig trying to pass his hate-filled rant off as 'literature'. If he is not married, I understand why. If he is married, I feel SO sorry for his wife - unless she is getting something better on the side, of course. Oh well, I'm sure the other haters loved it....
Anonymousalmost 15 years agothis author simply didn't like the original and wanted to rip it
Anonymousalmost 15 years agonot finale that I quit reading. When youa re talking about a hole then the word whole does not apply since anything with a hole is not whole. Get proofreaders, get editors, polish your writing style then begin with very short stories and work up to something of this lenght.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoDumb and dumber, and I was dumb to try to read it.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoOn second thought, STOP writing any more stories.
Spare us. Please !!!
Anonymousover 7 years agoIf you didn't like the original story, you should have written one yourself
Anonymousabout 7 years agoIt is hard to believe that anyone with as poor grammar, spelling and word usage as you do would think anyone wanted to read their poor work.
