All Comments on 'Beware of the Babysitter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great reading!

You were too much of a wimp. You should have raped that babysitter and knocked her up from the very first, and then you would have had some control over her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Amazing

Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Erotic

I was surprised how aroused I got reading this story! Interesting how a grown man can get himself into a situation and go the route of complying rather than face the issue (if he did there'd be no story!)

Looking forward to the next chapters. I have a feeling that once the week of being a slave is up, it will not be over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Ditto on the wimp comment

The story was stupid and totally implausible unless you were the husband. That makes sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good.

Very enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You can do better

In the future be sure to use both spell and grammar check, and then proof read it, twice.

Enjoyed the first part, will read the second part later. Very well done for a first.

NiceGuyInVaNiceGuyInVaabout 14 years ago
Great Job

Loved her total control over him. Very sensual as she had him totally under her power. I look forward to part two.... and more

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