All Comments on 'Bigfoot'

I liked your story with a nice romantic ending. One point: I think it's a pity you kind of repeat yourself in the sex scenes.

A bit more variation in the words and the actions would make it even better.

A great, well crafted little romantic story. Its kick relies on emotional involvment as well as the usual sexual mechanics, which is refreshing. I also liked the way that the Bigfoot was different to how I'd imagined him.

you could have done more with what you had. to bad you repeated yourself on the sex scenes.

Could have been better. The sentences are too short, and a little disjointed, which can be easily fixed. The storyline itself was great! A little sweet, a little sexy and a little quirky; if you fix the flow I think you'd have one hell of a story here.

considering the subject, bigfoot and it's not a topic that much is known of or really talked about- i liked what you did. it was actually ingenius to give bigfoot a new perspective & have it not be just a big ape running through the woods, but a disguise for an alien race to observe mankind. that you could write it into a erotic-love story was really nice. i give kudos for having a happy reunion at the end.