All Comments on 'Birth of a Dom'

by frygt_og_baeven

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 10 years ago

Welcome newbie. This was a very nice first piece. It is always interesting to have something that gives the thought process of a dom, especially when it is above and beyond the Tarzan level of me dom, you slave.

I look forward to more from you.

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 10 years ago
Unusual and fascinating

This was a very different take to the usual one and made a really fine read. Please bring us more - I like the way you write. Welcome and please have five stars for a great introduction to your talent.

subminxsubminxalmost 10 years ago
Great piece

I really loved this story. It would be great to read a longer piece with more "in bed action" intermingled with the dom thoughts

pleadingwifepleadingwifeover 5 years ago
I like the perspective

I liked this story a lot! It feels like me and my husband...my stories on here are my true experiences with the two of us, me as a sub, me who started it all and me who encouraged him to let go and become a dom. It was so insightful to see it all from the dom's perspective!

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