All Comments on 'Born Evil Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
yessssssss

Eagerly looking forward to the next installment of this series. It's just too bad that Literotica won't allow you to be explicit with the torture & gore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yikes!

Very realistic- I was turned on in spite of myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
missing much needed gore

i would fucking had loved this story if only the torture were there. The story is all about planning. You dont tell of the murder or the sexual torture, which is what im reading this for. i would love some detail of the torture, and a LOT more gore.

please keep this in mind on your next installment.

otherwise good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Final Chapter

The final chapter oif this story has been rejected by Literotica as 'too violent'. Anyone wishing to read it may send an e-mail to me and i will send it along to you.

Hoz_HunHoz_Hunover 10 years ago
Final Chapter I would like to read

For the previous commenter, you are showing to me as an anonymous so I can't send you an e-mail. I realy would like to read the last chapter. Well, I like to read all the chapters without censored.

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