by smudgebucket
Eagerly looking forward to the next installment of this series. It's just too bad that Literotica won't allow you to be explicit with the torture & gore.
i would fucking had loved this story if only the torture were there. The story is all about planning. You dont tell of the murder or the sexual torture, which is what im reading this for. i would love some detail of the torture, and a LOT more gore.
please keep this in mind on your next installment.
otherwise good story.
The final chapter oif this story has been rejected by Literotica as 'too violent'. Anyone wishing to read it may send an e-mail to me and i will send it along to you.
For the previous commenter, you are showing to me as an anonymous so I can't send you an e-mail. I realy would like to read the last chapter. Well, I like to read all the chapters without censored.