All Comments on 'Born For It'

you have written about my unfulfilled desire........please get to the next part

Great story. Can't wait for you to continue it and to see just how big of a slut for black cock you become. :)

It's nice to see someone being true to their desires instead of suppressing them. Of course, all males except black ones will be out of luck, but hey, 40 acres and a mule, right? ;) Take care of yourself kid.

I feel you wrote your story well, Kat.

I appreciated how often you shared what you thought, felt, and sensed, before (during, and after) the sex scenes.

I liked how you shared part of your essence through the secondary character?s feelings, too.

do it again like this!!!

I'm waiting for an experience like that of my own,

thank you, can't wait for the next one

Love it. Just like you I want more.

Kat, bring it on! Where are you going to take us next? Your story is a good read and since you are claiming that it is for real that makes it more interesting. Like I have said bring on more.

I can;t wait for him to get home and stick his hard dark cock in my wet pusst... thanks

Really enjoyed it,and i know you will love the ride becoming a slut for back cocks only.

Loved it...Made me think of my first time with a black stud! I can't wait for chapter 2!

Tell us more of what's going on inside your head especially when a black cock is poking down your throat and readying its delvery. Describe its taste without sounding trite and the texture of his seed. I like the way you say what's on your mind to your black lover. Perhaps you'd like to be shared among several black studs in another chapter. Be bold--go for it all!

Keep ridin' that black dick, girl. U owe it to yourself.

Pleas go on. This must be one of the hottest stories I have read for a long time.

Great story. Reminds me of my first time with a white girl. Keep it going.

I would love to read more stories from you as this woman grows up and becomes more involved in the lifestyle. Dress her up and let her go!

Loved your story...keep 'um cumming. To write a story like that you must know it... how good Black dick can be if you are fucked by a Blackman who knows how to work it.

I'm copying and pasting the story link as I type!!!!

Fuckkkkkkkkk that was hot with a capital F!!!!!!!!!!

That has to be the BEST fuck scene I have ever read!!!!!

You are exceptionally gifted at being very descriptive. Your talent lends itself to many more pieces of literotica to come. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

but cliched. The characters are right out of your favorite porn movie. I wonder just how many times are we going to read about the big, black guy with the 10+ inch cock fucking the gorgeous petite, blonde, white girl? Ugh. I was soooo surprised to read that Andre just happens to be the best looking black guy, and he just happens to have 11-12 inches! And, its amazing how these just turned 18 year old girls run off in Beamers, all slutted up, to hang out at party without a parent anywhere in the picture?! Groan.

That said, it is a reasonably well written, if unimaginative, fantasy piece, that may have been based on a real life experience. It needs proofreading, but it holds up well enough. It has moments of heat, and the pacing is good, but for me, the cliches made it impossible to suspend my sense of disbelief.

OH me..how I wish 14 yrs ago when I was a Senior and had this terrible crush on a Black classmate I had had the courage to follow through and let Him take me instead of breaking it off after a few makeout sessions. I had to be the "good lil girl" and now today I still wonder what it would have felt like to be used so roughly and wonderfully by a powerful Black Stud! I am so jealous but happy for you!

suzanne

Very hot story. Doesn't sound like any plot from some porno. Sounds like a high schooler getting what she wants. Can't wait to read more.

I read this story after I read the 3rd story. If possible, this is even better than the later story. I've had sex with a lot of black men and have thoroughly enjoyed it---there is nothing like having the forbidden fruit (to use another cliche)! Black men are generally so hot, and this story must be true as it reminds me of many of my real-life experiences. There is nothing hotter than interracial sex, particularly when the couple is fucking bare, without benefit of a condom. I have cum so hard on black dick---there is just nothing else like it! Thanks for a great read!

Wow, a literate erotica writer!!! This is a well crafted story that appeals on so many levels. As a woman I like the details that lead up to the experience, building a visual and sensory setting that really helps make it real. The descriptions of the bodies, sexual positions, colors and all of it are so fantastic. Thanks. I enjoyed it immensly

Dixie

Girl, your passion and need for Black love comes through loudly and clearly... and it is SO erotic to read. Please keep on writing! I'll definitely keep on reading.

Too bad this black brother didn't invite the whole football team into the little girl's bedroom to have their way with this slut. She deserves every big black (and white) dick she can get.

Nicely crafted story. Think about having this white-cheer bitch take on the whole squad in a new story. Or, maybe you've already written about that scenario?

I had to rub myself the whole way through...

I hope you will check my stuff out.

I re-read your story!

Still just as good as the first time!

I loved this. I hope you can read some of our storys. We are in a Yahoo Group. Jean_and_benErotica.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Jean_and_BenErotica/join

If you can't find them, email us at jean_and_ben@yahoo.com. I love this story. You were a slut before you were ever penetrated. I wish I was that bold at your age. I can't wait to read the rest of your story. Love and lust to you. Jean

Get it on Babe, Hang in there babe, get all you can, as often as you can, as long as you can! I am 84 and I can tell you that you will never wear your pussy out, it was designed to last a lifetime, so don't hold back, use it and be glad.

Fucking black men's cocks is what is white woman was made to do.

If that were true, there would be no white women. Think about it.

Can not wait to read the second chapter.

Your word usage is horrendous. It is obvious that you slept in English 101.

I sincerely suggest you read your product "before" you submit it for publication.

A wonderful story! And so well written. Well done! Amy x

Nothing like a big dick, black or white, if he's got the right motion then he can be my lotion.

Major heat.. love your writing.. damn hot..