by kssfrmarose_thorn
You did a good job at continueing it and writing well. I do wonder though, if you are going to continue? I bet this would turn out really good if you decided to continue with more chapters.
For a talky fellow he was pleasantly sinister and erotic. I like that it started out with a bang, but I'm wondering if you will write a continuation for us pervs and also explain what happened to the family?
Good way to continue from your 1st chapter. There certainly is room for more. Congrats!