All Comments on 'Breanna and Poker Night'

On the positive side: the play-by-play description is strong. My favorite passage was:

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He turned his chair as she approached, a hungry look on her face. She knelt before him, her ass pushed out. She placed her forearms on his thighs, her hands framing his genitals. She lightly kissed the head of his massive cock. Then she caressed his shaft with the tip of her tongue from tip to base. She licked his shaven balls in a figure eight, then deftly drew one into her mouth and then sucked the other in gently as well, still running her tongue around them. She eased his sac out of her mouth, and retraced her path up his shaft, lingering for a moment just below his head. She then took just the tip between her lips, her tongue separating the split. She stood, spreading her legs apart, giving the rest of us a glorious view, and never losing her contact with Jack's cock.</i>

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On the negative side: (1) the arrival of the main act was too abrupt, especially considering the unusual circumstances, (2) little attention was paid to the psychological aspect of the scenario, (3) the plot was too simple, with little tension-building.

wow. that made me so horny I didnt even make it to the end the first time