All Comments on 'Brittany & Jon: Thrice Tempted Ch. 01'

Why oh why would she accept a drink from someone, especially a questionable can of garbage from someone that is just "carrying it around just in case" and who has to claim that he hasn't touched it. Starting to think Brittany should be committed to prevent harming herself and others, she's that fucking stupid.

The terrible justifications the author writes in with her juvenile thought processes are laughable. And what about the previous times she's been in situations just like this? No lessons learnt? Come on is she really that stupid? Glad this is the last B&J story. It's just very repetitive and dumb at this point.

"Warning bells went off in her head but she ignored them." How convenient that she can choose to ignore such a thing but has no willpower over other obvious shit she should be ignoring. Terrible writing.

And yeah as someone mentioned, it's clear she's been given drugs but no police or anything called to get involved and the doctor just lets her go home? Sure OK whatever.

Not quite sure where you're going with this. Still waiting for Tommy.

Ever heard of the Police? The jungle juice or pimp-aid has the fucker's fingerprints on it.

another cocksucking fag posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Because after the trauma of their wedding anniversary, the only present that Brittany would have wanted to give Susan & Tommy for their party is a bomb.

A person has been drugged and a doctor just sends her home without taking blood tests to determine what the drugs are. That doctor must love to be sued to release her from the hospital without giving her proper care.

I have to admit I was wondering 'what the hell happened at Tommy's birthday party that got jon all wound up.' Not enough detail anywhere here about it.

Now I have to wait another week for chapter one? And this is actually chapter 3??

That'll teach you to submit it all at once, eh, TT??

Looks like there was a mess up. I just found out about it and I have sent in a replacement copy of chapter one but it could take a week to get posted. I'm not sure who messed up but we may find out when LE posts chapter three. I could have gotten the wrong chapter copied as chapter one but then again it came out right on another site.

Anyway please come back and reread it when it gets worked out. And thank you all for the comments I do apperciate them.

Tabooteller

Since TT hasn't commented yet, I'll let you all know. This is chapter three of this story. somehow it got messed up and posted as chapter one. I talked to TT earlier in the week and he had submitted them to LE, so I don't know how this happened. I doubt that it's TT who messed up so there may have been some confusion on Lit's part.

Just wanted to let you guys know, that there was more to this story and check back soon for the corrected version. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Another great story. Thanks.

A good ending to a nice story You were able to tie up all the loose ends great

A lot of things going on here but it looks like everything came out all right in the end. Thanks for a good read.