All Comments on 'Bullied by a Girl'

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago

I don't know why but I so didn't like this story, just made me want to smack them both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
didnt like

felt like I was reading a comic book with all the pseudo sound effects, which completely detract from the story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
so much potential

so poorly done. can't say that i was taken in by the style. left the characters rather lifeless. agree with poster who said it felt like reading a comic book. came off as rather juvenile. maybe redo it in a different style? the concept was a good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Uhm...

It was a good read and I laughed a little but there was no story, it was straight forward and I didn't know what I was reading. It started getting good at the end but of course you ended it.

Also, the boy actually says ''boo-hoo''? And he ''sobs'' from the early stage of the ''bullying''? He also said he's going to tell on her. The boy sounded like a 10 year old.

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