All Comments on 'Business Trips'

It was great that you wrote it in a me-you style, allowing 'paticipation' by the reader. Watching mastuirbation can be so much fun!

...I like it A.E.

Drew :)

great story keep writing

You've given us a really hot fantasy of what could happen, without making it seem far-fetched. Nicely done!

I see the true nature of the man here, wanting but not wanting to be the guy who fucks on the road. Like the way you let him cum to her, let her bring huim to what he really wanted but knew he needed that push.

I liked the sense of reality - more bitch!