All Comments on 'Busy in the Buff Ch. 02'

Great story!

I love female doctor/male patient encounters, and this was well written (not descending into an instant bj the minute Zack got his junk out).

Would like to see another story between these two, where things perhaps go further? :)

I like these stories, but one thing that really bugs me is the use of passive voice. It's a lot better in this story than in your first, but it still pops out at me and interrupts the flow. Fix that and the flow of the story will be more natural.

So you'd rather a first person perspective from Zack? Or perhaps from his companions? Elaborate if you will. Thanks for the feedback.

this was great...saw you haven't posted in a while but I hope you'll reconsider and continue this.

As a middle aged female doctor, I became quite intrigued with this story......

Dr. Carrie

Is there a follow on in the works? Great story

Carrie