All Comments on 'By Chance or Destiny?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very plauseable story

be a good chance this couple will live happily ever after.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
sweet and juicy

This story is amazing! I love how their speech is written with a southern drawl. You're descriptions left enough room for the readers mind to create it's own images. The ending is a bit abrupt, but wonderful, nonetheless. I am impressed!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
a better ending

Aside from no illustration except a shower stall (huh? that's not sexy)...was hoping she would have backed her ass onto that soapy dick. Sounds like she certainly could have handled it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

it was sexy and also sweet. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good, good.

I expected a little bit more at the end, but alas....

Most certainly not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
duh

HOW IS THAT A PICTURE?? WE NEED SOME SEX!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Illustrated

Illustrated? Surely you jest

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