All Comments on 'Can I Love? Ch. 02'

Good story but just a little short.. DK and SW are a bad influence, I see.. well, I hope she finds her way in love.. She's disappointed to see it's her sister at the door but then she's anxious for him to leave as soon as he gets there.. I don't think she's flighty but she needs more firm decisions.

looking forward to chapter three.

Very nice, indeed! A very good story. And to NIGHTOW122 I'd like to point out this is a story of a rape victim. Victims of sexual assault, especially if they're young, wrestle with conflicting emotions regarding men. Anger & distrust are frequent amoung victims. Kaylacakes, you received a "Very Nice" from Daniellekitten. She's a great writer, so that's a great compliment. You should be proud.

YOU HAD A LOT OF GUTS WITH YOUR STORY. IT SOUNDED VERY PERSONAL TO ME. I WISH I HAD THE GUTS TO WRITE A STORY!

I can't read anymore of this poor grammar! Stood instead of standing. Was instead of were. They are just a few!