All Comments on 'Captured and Conquered Ch. 05'

This is such a great story. Please keep writing it, I'm always coming to your page seeing if you posted a new part. I hope Julia doesn't get away...

I'm so glad you are continuing this story! I enjoy your style of writing and the way you are sharing both points of view. I can't wait for more!

Would love you to continue....love the story line. However I struggle with how he believes he can rip someone out of their environment where they are thriving and expect them to bend to his will? He has taken way from her the very things that attracted him to her in the first place and wants her to be nothing but a sex toy.

While I struggle with his thoughts...I still love the story. Please don't keep us waiting.

I really hope you continue writing this story!

How I have been dying for a story where a woman triumphs over her captor - and not some false triumph, where she suffers from Stockholm Syndrome, and thinks she "loves" him because only he can understand her dark desires - but where she gets the upper hand and leaves him - completely - because she knows what she wants and it isn't he. I hope she wins - in every way. Let there be one story like that.

Yes please keep writing! Although personally I hope it doesnt end in her escape, if she came back consenting though...

Please finish it!

:-)

When's the next chapter coming?

I have a love/hate thing about this story, its good, but she must be her own person with dignity and self respect, not just a slab of meat with a few holes for him to fuck and play with. She must be allowed to go, and if she wants him, to return on her own terms.

i cant wait anymore.

Chap 6 posted

What a loser he is!!! Seriously??? Beating a girl with a belt??? And she is into it??? I just don't buy this story...