by rocketgirl2011
just sort of reads like "A day in the life". We didn't even see at the time that Parker saw them, and Carrie defused the situation pretty quickly. I hope there's more to the story than this, because so far this is barely a stand-alone.
However, there must be more to this story than this short introduction. Well I hope so.
My best wishes
I really like this story but I would like for it to be longer and give us some more background on carrie , parker and matt. Keep it going . Good job so far !!
It's just too short. I agree we need more information about the dynamic between Carrie and Matt. I think you can stretch the story a little more.
But I agree far ot short. You need to write more. It so refreshing to get a differnt perspective for a change.
Best regards
C
I really enjoyed Carrie and Parker. I think there can be more of a story there and i hope there is :)
I like these characters. Please tell me you plan on writing more about them? I think I see a threesome with Matt in the future.
Really good story about these too. Love the chemistry..cant wait to read more
I like that Carrie is finally free to be herself,to let herself go and allow herself to love Parker and be loved :>)
Got two nice Characters and the sub plot of Parkers jealousy over Matt and others its enough to get her a few more Spankings. I do not know why you stopped writing about them but they are worth More.
They always keep readers hanging on! But truth be known, most have busy lives, family & other stresses in life that takes them away never to be heard of again!!! Oh well! Who knows maybe one day we will read more about these two characters again!