by rocketgirl2011
They always keep readers hanging on! But truth be known, most have busy lives, family & other stresses in life that takes them away never to be heard of again!!! Oh well! Who knows maybe one day we will read more about these two characters again!
Got two nice Characters and the sub plot of Parkers jealousy over Matt and others its enough to get her a few more Spankings. I do not know why you stopped writing about them but they are worth More.
I like that Carrie is finally free to be herself,to let herself go and allow herself to love Parker and be loved :>)
Really good story about these too. Love the chemistry..cant wait to read more
I like these characters. Please tell me you plan on writing more about them? I think I see a threesome with Matt in the future.
I really enjoyed Carrie and Parker. I think there can be more of a story there and i hope there is :)
But I agree far ot short. You need to write more. It so refreshing to get a differnt perspective for a change.
Best regards
C
It's just too short. I agree we need more information about the dynamic between Carrie and Matt. I think you can stretch the story a little more.
I really like this story but I would like for it to be longer and give us some more background on carrie , parker and matt. Keep it going . Good job so far !!
However, there must be more to this story than this short introduction. Well I hope so.
My best wishes
just sort of reads like "A day in the life". We didn't even see at the time that Parker saw them, and Carrie defused the situation pretty quickly. I hope there's more to the story than this, because so far this is barely a stand-alone.