All Comments on 'Castaways: Retribution'

stupidity-?

This was a pretty good story of revenge, although not quite realistic it was very interesting.

Stupid story, stupid story-line. Not worth reading. Load of absolute rubbish. Only thing I'll give you is that you had the courage to post it. But why ?

but i loved it anyhow. i especially enjoyed the references to real life happenings like the pervert austrian dad, and the chat shows. had to stifle a giggle at the thought of the 'widowed' husband getting oprah all teary eyed.

well done!

shit women's fantasy romance novels spout and realize this is actually in that vane. Not bad but some parts are just to rough without developed continuity.

Good to see Helen having her revenge.

Loved it. After all she went through, poor Helen deserved a happy ending. Not that I did not enjoy reading about her misadventures, though, your stories are great.

De ja vous? Mais non, c'est deja vu.

Don't you remember?

waste time on. I wish I could get it back.

An editor would have helped a LOT! Because this was badly written and full of holes.

And did she have Louisa and John killed? How did they just disappear? Oh well, Funny in places, ludicrous in others.

An entertaining story. Thanks for writing.

I liked that we finally had a story with Helen wining. I really wish you'd do more stories where she beats Luisa.