by doalfer
i can not wait till you write the continuation and find out how they do on the introduction evening
Jenny, all I can say is that you had me from the very first sentence.
Beautiful writing, and your timing of the story's length was perfect. Most good writers end their stories way to soon, but truely Great writers are able to time it perfectly just as you did.
Mark is truly a mighty blessed man.
Let me know when you have more experiences to tell about.
Your ardent admirer,
Nesher