All Comments on 'Chamber Maid's First Affair'

I enjoyed your story. Your English and grammar are good for second language.

I found your story erotic and pleasurable.

Thanks for a good start.

I really liked your story. Please keep up the good work.

An editor will fix some of the problems like "I told me how guilty" and "wanting to watch me fucked by other men and screamed " These incidence were just in the last paragraph.It takes away from the flow of the story when you have to stop and figure out what the author is trying to say. I voted on the content and concept of the story, which is good. Keep writing and fix the little annoying disruptions in the story and you will have a winner. Thanks.......Rich

You did very well. I would suggest you ask someone to look through the stroy next time. As for the story itself? Normally I wouldn't condone cheating for any reason. But in this story I wouldn't say you have an excuse but you do have several reasons for going outside of your marriage. I would urge you to divorce your husband and find someone who really cares for you. if it is your lover in the story, then go ahead talk to him see if he will help you out. Anyway nice story, I liked it.

Very erotic, sexy stroke story. Why anyone would complain about your English is beyond me. I pictured myself listening to your voice over the phone, both of us having phone sex. Who cares if you occasionally didn't use proper grammar. In fact, it was a turn on for me because it's how your mind works. More, please!

and completely unerotic. You're a very naughty li...I mean enormous...girl and you deserve a good spanking. But I wouldn't dare. Mancelt.

Maria, That's a great story! Nick is such a lucky man. Your husband seemed like a jerk and deserved being cheated on. You are young, go fuck your brains out. Tell us more, girl. I love latin women, so hot.

Great story. The English was very good, and the little hints that English is not your first language made the story even better. It gave a voice to your character.

Keep writing, you did a great job, very sexy.

Great story. One of the best. I really liked it because it was so believable. Very well written and it flowed well.

Keep up the good work.

Mike

another hot story brilliant writing and story.

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