All Comments on 'Chandini’s Disappointment'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
killed reading

When the auther began to frequently use ...... it killed my desire to continue reading the story. Almost all could easlily be removed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
translation

was very hard to read due to broken english.

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