All Comments on 'Cinnamon's Sentence Ch. 02'

Cinnamon is a great writer. She mixes sensitive romantic writing, with strong erotic writing. Looking forward to more.

Saw this in the new stories, read both chapters, and now I want to know what happens next.

Thanks for posting such an interesting read!

good and although short it surely is a good read...can't wait to read on. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I really can't wait to read the rest...already in chapter 2 something is starting to form between them! It's great!

I like your story, but it seems the emotional connection has been established too quickly. It would make more sense as a Stockholm syndrome type matter, but that'd take a couple of chapters before she submitted.

Good writing none the less

I've read this story an I still think Jay is an asshole for treating Cinnamon the way he does. And I think this story is greatly written, I enjoyed reading it each time.

i beg of you, come back and write for the collective viewing pleasure. oh, and what happened to sadie and her sargent? i would love to read sadie and her guy's story.