All Comments on 'Cinnamon's Sentence Ch. 06'

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayabout 18 years ago
Glad....

it turned out ok and all is safe...hope to see more soon and whats next for the little family...respectfully fan in Texas naynay

crazirandi14crazirandi14almost 18 years ago
One more to go!

Ahhh, one more chapter! I can't wait! :)

magiczeesmagiczeesalmost 12 years ago
Jay is an idiot.

He could have seriously hurt Cinnamon and Sophie because of he's selfishness. Glad an the baby was healthy though. I don't know what Cinna sees in him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
That baby is too thin

The baby is disconcertingly underweight, especially for how long she is. That's completely unrealistic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I hope people read stories under this section with the knowledge that none of these relationships are healthy or to be repeated (unless you're roleplaying with a partner/partners you trust and safewords), but some of the comments for this series make me wonder...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

100% unrealistic story. Sex cannot induce early or premature labor. *sigh*

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