by raginrhinotoons
He hated his brother because he looked up to him growing up? This sucked...1
His friends got involved!
I understand he hated his brother and wanted to get even, but Cindy was a nice person why did he turn her into a whore or slut!
So while I loved the whole story .... I HATED the ending!
Gave it a 4!
some time writers get carried away to make a story a little longer and include some portions that are really not necessary or make the story look real bad. That is what happened here. There was really no need to get other guys involved if a brother wanted to take revenge over his older brother for what he did in college a few years ago. but guess every writer write his own story. it is always left to the readers who gives score at the end.
I really didn't like how this ended.
Also his original plan was to have her beg him to fuck her not the blackmailling.
And what jason did was really stupid Cindy could have been his but i shouldn't be surprized jason is clearly someone of seriously short-sighted.
you kept switching the names of the two brothers back and forth and it was confusing and taking away from the story, you did that a lot you need to proofread before you post, although the story was good, I have to agree with the other reader's comments about bringing the friends in to fuck her, you could have left that out, you didn't need it. I gave it 3 stars.
HOT! Now that Hammer and friends know where Cindy lives and the code words, do they return for more? Can she take all three again, even all three at once? DWH