All Comments on 'Code Grey'

I really enjoyed this! I hope it will continue? Great job!

Not really believeable but a cute read. We need a part two to find out more about EVE. What was Grey's illness? I know it wasn't erectile disfuntion.

Nice read ML

DG Hear

Personally I think they gave him morphine for pain ... morphine is known to cause strange dreams.

Regards, Jack

and a sure cure for sick bed boredom. Great job, Lynn. It was a fun read. Kudos.

but a little hard to believe. Of course, it is supposed to be fantasy. Good luck in the contest.

Cute story. Good luck!

MistressLynn has wonderful insight into a man's reaction to a sexy woman. Well done!

Nookiehunter

I enjoyed the story immensely. You seem to be growing as a writer. Good luck in the contest.

and very funny!

Maharat

A fun story. I enjoyed this take. Was originally attracted to the telling spelling... 'Grey'...?

Well done, Lynn. This was a really fun story to read.

I loved the sense of humor you gave this piece, Lynn. Nicely done. I think I might have to find an excuse to go to the hospital.

Howdy there, Mistress Lynn.

Nice story you've written there. It makes me wish I'd had a similar 'meeting' with the friends that came to see me during my last stay in a hopsital, six months ago. Of course, the injuries prevented any memories of four of the five days, so maybe it DID happen, after all. Anyhoo, you throw down quite a gauntlet for a challenger to pick up and respond with their own story, hoping to make it better. Good luck.

Lets hope they have friends like these! Fun ones!

Loved it. More please.

With friends like that - how could he have high blood pressure? enjoyed the humour in this one.

That was a good fantasy and a fun read. Good luck in the contest. :)

I'll remember this story the next time I'm in a hospital bed, even though my friends are not as fun. :-)

I'd love a hospital like this!

And very well written! And I still don't know why I enjoyed it so much!

Good Luck

A wonderful tale, Lynn. Very well written with excellent dialogue. Where does he go now to recuperate from his stay in the hospital?

Well scripted